First roleplay!

This is the first roleplay on the site. Here's how it works... Someone posts a post the leaves you hanging. Other people finish that post and it keeps on going...
I walk down the empty alley. I stop in front of the building. The restaurant owned by three brothers. THE STRIATON GYM!!!!!

Icey walked across the street into Professor Juniper's Lab. "Hello there Elizabeth!" said Professor Juniper. "Are you here for your First Pokemon? She said. "I sure am!" I said excitedly. I ran over to Professor Juniper who held out one Pokemon Ball. "This is it. Enjoy your Journey! She handed Icey a Pokedex and the ball and I walked outside. "I wonder who this is..." Said Icey as she threw the ball. A Squirtle came out. "Wow!" Said Icey. "Do you really know Water Gun?" The two walked to Stration.

I walk inside the building. "My first gym battle..." I murmur to myself quietly. "Don't worry, Dad. I will live up to your expectations."

Icey stumbled into the tall grass, falling down. "Ow!" An Eevee walked over, but this was no ordinary Eevee, this was a SHINY Eevee! Preparing a Pokeball from Professor Juniper, Icey said "Squirtle use water gun!" Squirtle shooted a blast of water at Eevee, leaving it speechless. "Poke ball GO!" One... Two... Three... CLICK!

I defeat the two trainers easily, and walk calmly onto the gym leaders' platform. "I challenge... THE STRIATON GYM!" I yell.

Squirtle and Eevee followed Icey sprinting to the Stration gym. Defeating the two trainers, She ran back to heal up before going back to the gym. Running in she bumped into someone. (That's you Admin!)

The platform lights up and at that exact time someone bumps into me. "OW!" I yell, falling on the floor.

"Sorry..." Icey mumbled getting up with Eevee on her head. "Return you guys."

"Haha, it's not a problem." I say, laughing slightly. "I was just about to challenge the gym."

"Oh, so was I." Said Icey. "Good luck!" Icey backed away.

"Thanks!" I say, then turn back to the gym leaders. "Now, from my studying, I would assume I have to battle Cilan, since my starter was Oshawott."

"I need to figure out his strategy, I have a water type." Icey says.

"Right.." Cilan says. "Then I, as the gym leader of Striaton gym, shall BATTLE YOU!" I send out Riolu. "EVALUATION TIME!" Cilan yells. I facefloor. "Oh, no... Not this again..." I say.
"YOU AND RIOLU ARE IN PERFECT SYNC!" He rambles.
"No duh, dipwad." I say.

"Oh god... Cilan's evaluation?" (I will continue his ramblings.)
"YOU AND OSHAWOTT ARE IN SYNC! YOU ARE BOTH WATER TYPES! SMOOTH! CALM! SAVORY! LIKE BUTTER ON POPCORN! LIKE THE... UM... ER... SEA!

"Can we just get on with the battle now?" I grumble.
"Oh, yes, er, um, er, oh, the battle! Yes!" Cilan says.
"Dipwad." I mutter.
Cilan sends out a LILLIPUP. Yep, you read that right, a Normal type against my Fighting type. Is he trying to get himself pawned?
"ALRIGHT! Riolu! Use Mach punch!" I start the battle off.

"Use Leer!" says Cilan.

I sigh. "You idiotic dipwad, don't you know my Riolu's ability is Clear Body?" I ask. "Riolu! Finish this off with a last Mach Punch!" Cilan still looks shocked. "A-alright... Go, Pansage!" He says, returning Lillipup. I grimace. "Return, Riolu. Go, Mew!"

Cilans Pansage fainted.

"Wow..." Cilan says. "I forfeit."
"YES!" I yell. "I got... THE TRIO BADGE!"

"It's MY turn!" I say. "Go... Squirtle!" "Where in the WORLD did you get a Squirtle?" Wondered Cilan out loud. "From Professor Juniper. She says it was a gift from Professor Oak. "Pansage use Tail Whip!" "Squirtle use tackle!" "Pansage use Tail Whip!" "Squirtle use tackle!" "Pansage use Tail Whip!" "Squirtle use tackle!" "Pansage has fainted!" said the announcer. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Said Cilan. "Take your filthy badge!" "YAY!" I said. "Thanks!" I ran out of the room, hoping to catch up with the other person.

I turn around, waiting for the girl who bumped into me. She soon catches up to me, and asks, "What's your name? I didn't catch it." "Christina, but you can call me Chris."

"My name is Elizabeth, but most call me Icey. Nice to meet you."

"Ditto." I reply. "So, are you traveling the Unova region too? Wait! Wait! You're that new girl who just moved in Nuevma town from the Kanto region! I traveled there once. Nice place."

"It sure is a nice place." I reply. "And yes, I am traveling the region. This is Squirtle, and Eevee."

"These are my Pokemon!" I say, releasing them from their Pokeballs. "Mew, Riolu, Eevee, Oshawott, and Dratini."